As Transition music video

This is my transition music video, from making this video i have learnt basic forms of editing and how to construct a music video into a form of story. I used Adobe Première to edit the footage down to fit with the track my group was given.

To improve my own music video i know i need to plan out my video bit by bit and focus more on the narrative and make sure that Goodwin's theory is used a lot better than what i did in my transition video.